see double ticks.3-4). Tilføj indhold til siden uden at redigere den. M's servicevilkår - hvad du kan, hvad du ikke skal osv. Some of your close readings are wonderfully astute, as when you point out that Tess implores Angel, rather than commanding him. Nevertheless, a very good, thoughtful and original argument. There is a huge difference between crafting a speech and writing an essay. You are clearly very good at pursuing and proving an argument. Standing motionless while speaking in a monotone voice doesnt simply drain your audiences energy, it deprives them of understanding like writing a text in one run-on sentence with no punctuation or breaks. There is also the possibility, of course, that Conrad might identify with Marlow while at the same time undercutting his 'racism' not by expressing alternative perceptions but by plotting (see Peter Brooks, reading FOR THE plot as one way into this; Toni Morrison's playing. Your conclusion is deft, with a very strong sense of the complexity of the issues. Very minor errors highlighted on script.
This lack of subtlety can be repetitive and inelegant in a written document, but it is essential to the spoken word. Lead or end an argument with statistics. If youre a great writer, dont assume it will translate immediately to the spoken word. You could do more to say specifically why Bosnia, Rwanda and Armenia are cases of genocide at the start of the essay? Noget virker ikke som forventet? Large audiences often require that you use a microphone and speak from an elevated platform.